By Kristyn Oliver
I started to read Star Girl by Jerry Spinelli. In Arizonia there is a school named Mica Area High School. There is this guy named Leo and Kevin and they are the main characters in the story. One day at school they heard that there was a new girl at school and she was different but they didnt think anything of it until they saw her. Her name was Stargirl Caraway she was different. She didnt look like anyother girl. She had a blonde color hair and she wore a ukulele strapped to back at all times. When it was someones birthday she would sing happy birthday to them and noone really new that it was that persons birthday. When everyone in the school saw Stargirl they didnt think that was a real girl they thought the school planted her in there school for some weird reason or she was an actress. Leo and Kevin wanted to put Stargirl in the hot seat. That was all i read this week for ssr.
I started to read Star Girl by Jerry Spinelli. In Arizonia there is a school named Mica Area High School. There is this guy named Leo and Kevin and they are the main characters in the story. One day at school they heard that there was a new girl at school and she was different but they didnt think anything of it until they saw her. Her name was Stargirl Caraway she was different. She didnt look like anyother girl. She had a blonde color hair and she wore a ukulele strapped to back at all times. When it was someones birthday she would sing happy birthday to them and noone really new that it was that persons birthday. When everyone in the school saw Stargirl they didnt think that was a real girl they thought the school planted her in there school for some weird reason or she was an actress. Leo and Kevin wanted to put Stargirl in the hot seat. That was all i read this week for ssr.
I like how your review of Star Girl is a different take than Rachel's but tells the same story: it's about this different girl in a school where everyone is the same. Reread your work next time and slow down when you write however. You crammed a number of words together, some words are lowercase when they shouldn't be and some sentences are grammatically incorrect. Read your work outloud if you have to.
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